Tuesday, 5 May 2020
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Yes James!
ReplyDeleteI have been looking forward to the rest of your story and it is great that you linked the first part at the top.
Great descriptive language used throughout your story again.
I wonder if you could have described the fight in more detail?
Ka pai
Mrs Parsons
WOW! I read the next episode of the Quarantine Series with excitement and interest. I love the way you took your reader on the journey with you and made us feel like we were there with you. I especially like the words you use to 'paint a picture' in the readers head. I am waiting excitedly for the next installment..... LFA
ReplyDeleteI am loving your writing at the moment, the words and language you use help the reader see what is going on in the story. You have done a great jog.
ReplyDeleteKa pai
Mrs Devine