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Hi James. I love how you used paragraphs to separate your ideas so I could understand that they're different things. Great work James keep it up. From Alexander
I like your pet day slide James that is a nice looking doggy have their do you know what breed it is? next time instead of just writing pet day you could say what it is about. by Albie
Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments. Positive - something done well Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
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Hi James.
ReplyDeleteI love how you used paragraphs to separate your ideas so I could understand that they're different things. Great work James keep it up.
From Alexander
I like your pet day slide James that is a nice looking doggy have their do you know what breed it is?
ReplyDeletenext time instead of just writing pet day you could say what it is about.
by Albie