Thursday, 12 November 2020

Pet day

 

2 comments:

  1. Hi James.
    I love how you used paragraphs to separate your ideas so I could understand that they're different things. Great work James keep it up.
    From Alexander

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  2. I like your pet day slide James that is a nice looking doggy have their do you know what breed it is?
    next time instead of just writing pet day you could say what it is about.
    by Albie

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