Friday, 24 April 2020
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Thank you for sharing this powerful writing. You have painted a picture with words and I feel very sad for that soldier (you) sitting in that trench. Powerful words and description! LF Anny x
ReplyDeleteoh dear James I don't think that I would have made a very good soldier if those are the conditions they had to live in. I like the part where you talked about your thoughts, its very powerful and showed that you were really engaged in your writing. from Nan
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