Friday, 24 April 2020
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I was caught up in the moment of your writing and felt like I was in that fight with you! Great use of language and sentences. LF Annyxx
ReplyDeletelong live the Lion King and his brother. exciting writing James. you built up to an exciting climax and then ended with a good statement about brothers.
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